An Entry for the Written Category Of The Damien Molony Forum Creative Competition, shared here after prize winner announced, for feedback and comments.
Michael eat your heart out...there's a new poet in the house! and it REALLY rhymes and everything!
I like how your poem is about Hal from Alex's perspective Nikki, and i really hope you feel like sharing your other poem that we couldn't enter into the competition because it had been seen before, that was great too!
Brilliant work Nikki! This is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it from Alex's perspective. I could actually hear her voice in my head while reading it. You really captured both Alex and Hal in this!
Wonderful work!
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It's a really nice look you've got going on there :wink: