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Topic: 'One Gentle Thing', by NikkiWhitehead

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An Entry for the Written Category Of The Damien Molony Forum Creative Competition, shared here after prize winner announced, for feedback and comments.


'One Gentle Thing' by NikkiWhitehead

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"One Gentle Thing"

Every day I sit and stare
While he is tied up in that chair
He growls, he spits, he starts to swear
'Til he remembers that I'm there.

"I'm very sorry" I hear him say
But I just nod and turn away
This looks to be another day
When I wish that I could fade away.

But then I look into his eyes
He sees my fear and then he cries
He says sorry for all his lies
My fear of him then quickly dies.

He has been cruel, I am not blind
He wants to leave that man behind
Erase his past and press rewind
To become more human, be more kind.

If we can show him that we care
That Tom and I will be right there
To save our friend from this nightmare
Release him from that fucking chair.

 




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Michael eat your heart out...there's a new poet in the house! and it REALLY rhymes and everything!

I like how your poem is about Hal from Alex's perspective Nikki, and i really hope you feel like sharing your other poem that we couldn't enter into the competition because it had been seen before, that was great too!

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Brilliant work Nikki! This is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it from Alex's perspective. I could actually hear her voice in my head while reading it. You really captured both Alex and Hal in this!

Wonderful work!

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Loved it Nikki, even more now I know that you wrote it :))

I've read the other poem that Nikki couldn't put in for the comp too - it's ace! Get it up on here, woman!!

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Brookesey wrote:

Loved it Nikki, even more now I know that you wrote it :))

I've read the other poem that Nikki couldn't put in for the comp too - it's ace! Get it up on here, woman!!


 do it. do it. do it do it do it...



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Brookesey wrote:

Loved it Nikki, even more now I know that you wrote it :))

I've read the other poem that Nikki couldn't put in for the comp too - it's ace! Get it up on here, woman!!


 Oh yes please Nikki. I didn't see the other poem either.  smile



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