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Thank you whimsy, will enjoy later as an Easter day read treat!

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I love seeing that a new chapter of this story has been posted. I already told whimsy that this chapter made me cry.

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Loved the revelation in this new chapter whimsy, beautifully conceived.

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At long last, I braved posting this.  Chapter 24: Her Body



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A lilt in his voice.  Every sentence like music...
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I always feel joy and trepidation when I see a new chapter of this wonderful fic posted. Joy because it's always a pleasure to read Whimsy's incredible writing. Trepidation because I KNOW HOW IT ENDS!!

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Thank you for sharing your latest masterpiece whimsy, as always you write superbly and have Hal's mannerisms and vocal phrasing down to a tee, I can see him speaking and how he is saying it when reading. So much tension and tragedy!

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Thanks for the kind words.  

Writing Hal's mannerisms is one of my favorite parts of this little exercise.  I see clearly every little tilt of his head, the movement of his hands. I hear every posh inflection, roll my eyes at every quip, sense every little breathy wobble in his voice.  I have to restrain myself from overwriting it!  Damien masterfully fleshed out so many of Hal's distinct quirks.



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papillon... pamplemousse... bibliothèque... un baiser
A lilt in his voice.  Every sentence like music...
#kisskisskiss 
A terrible beauty is born.
Love me some #Jacksass

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The beginning of the end... Ch 25: A Warmer Coat



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papillon... pamplemousse... bibliothèque... un baiser
A lilt in his voice.  Every sentence like music...
#kisskisskiss 
A terrible beauty is born.
Love me some #Jacksass

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Whimsy! Knowing what's going to happen doesn't make this any less painful to read. A sense of impending tragedy runs all the way through this chapter.

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whimsyfox.......Well I may 4 years late to the party here but I wanted to tell you I very much enjoyed your fan fic stories. Very well written and yes I very much got into the story!!!

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SusanG, welcome and thank you for your kind words! What a sweet thing to read out of the blue. Has it really been 4 years?!?!  Wow, I really need to finish this!  My new target, by the end of the year!  



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papillon... pamplemousse... bibliothèque... un baiser
A lilt in his voice.  Every sentence like music...
#kisskisskiss 
A terrible beauty is born.
Love me some #Jacksass

 
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